So I've been planning on running Anders Sandberg's "My Invisible Friend" scenario as a sort of introductory game for my roommates and friends who have never played EP before. I'm planning on using the current Eclipse Fate iteration Posthuman released last year, since it seems mostly functional except for Psi, but what I've been working on is tweaking and modifying the scenario to fit my own preferences as I flesh it out, since Sandberg's scenarios are more freeform and leave a good bit of the heavy lifting for the GMs (Which I personally like, because it gives me room to be creative!).
Most of what I've added are background politics between the Militia and Security, the former of which is secretly backed by Martian Oversight and the latter is being armed and supplied by the LLA, but the major change is this: rather than being Firewall sentinels sent to follow up on leads left from "Think Before Asking", the party are a group of inner system mercenaries hired by one Doctor Driscoll-Toyoda to board the station and rescue his colleague Doctor Elliot Dones. One player will be playing Toyoda and will get a special brief, while the others are allowed to make their own characters as they see fit; the Toyoda player will be playing the role of their client, while they are the professionals.
The twist is that "Toyoda" is not really Toyoda, but someone who is very interested in finding out what Dones knows about Toyoda's work with Seed AI and whether a similar project is being undertaken on Heinlein. Their employers, whose name has been psychosurgically removed to preserve OpSec, has ordered them to board the station, locate Dones, find out what he's been working on, and neutralize or obtain any dangerous information or materials before someone else gets their hands on it. Of course things will be complicated when they get on board and find that Dones has been arrested, leaving a bunch of scared kids and a message begging his "dear friend" to save them instead of him.
At first I planned on having the Toyoda impersonator be a Firewall Proxy, with the reveal in the epilogue of the scenario, but then I realized that it would be awesome if they actually turned out to be an Ozma agent acting on intel from one of their moles in Firewall; kind of like the big twist at the end of the Know Evil Earth one-shot, "Ozma thanks you for your service" and all that. The new players wouldn't necessarily get the full impact, but the ones who have read the book and know about Firewall and Ozma would hopefully be surprised.
Thoughts?