I wrote the scenario over the span of about a week, with some excellent advice and religious advice from a friend of mine. The players have gotten roughly... I would say about a quarter of the way into the scenario in terms of gametime, but there will be events that will take a lot of game-time for them to use up, so I'm guessing about a third is done, in that case? I've never run for such a large group before.
So, for good or for bad, that is my writing. If it sucks, by all means, let me know. I do not like fake praise, and good constructive feedback is what I'll need if I ever want to write it up as a professionally designed published scenario, which is my hope.
